Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Laborer's tanka

before the toil
I stand at this gate
a deep breath
to tame the rush
flapping at my back


Lampineung, August 12, 2009
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  1. Ram Krishna SinghAugust 12, 2009 at 10:42 AM

    You write well and well-orgaised is your page.
    R K Singh

    http://rksingh.blogspot.com

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  2. John McDonaldAugust 12, 2009 at 5:09 PM

    a delightful one

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  3. Wahyu W. BasjirAugust 12, 2009 at 7:02 PM

    Dear John and RK,

    Thx for checking. I am still grappling with this genre actually. I find it a bit hard at the first time, and I just start with tanka. Your comments on technical issues are most
    welcome.

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