The first haiku altered into two different versions. Don't know which one is the best.
i/
fancy dinner
bought for a long lost friend
how much?
the change i keep for myself
since our last encounter
ii/
buy a dinner
with long lost friend
too much
the change i keep
only for myself
iii/
treat a friend
to a fancy dinner
is it too much?
the change i keep for myself
since our last encounter
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Sunday, April 10, 2011
Friday, February 25, 2011
Warm camellia haiku
warm camellia
sensation from the last encounter
stains my napkin
teh hijau hangat
getar dari pertemuan terakhir
membekas di serbet
sensation from the last encounter
stains my napkin
teh hijau hangat
getar dari pertemuan terakhir
membekas di serbet
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