Thursday, January 27, 2011

A table for two tanka

less talk
at a table for two
we are too busy with foods
or is it the rain falling
within our minds?

After an online discussion with my fellow tanka poets, the altered version goes..

a table for two
we talk less for
these good foods
or is it the rain falling
within our minds?

Indonesian translation needed. Somebody help me!
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2 comments:

  1. Iyut A.C.NJanuary 27, 2011 at 12:40 PM

    kurangi berbicara
    satu meja berdua
    kita terlalu sibuk dengan makanan
    ataukah hujan berjatuhan
    dalam pikiran kita?

    Benar gak, Pak. Hehehe saya awam tentang tanka. Bagaimana menyusunnya. Salam

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  2. Wahyu W. BasjirJanuary 27, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    Terimakasih untuk terjemahannya, Iyut. Juga untuk kunjungannya.

    Salam hangat,

    WWB

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