Wooden bench haiku

Previously posted on June 18, 2009, reposted for typographic error. Original post deleted.

(1)
deserted park--
a wooden bench succumbs
to the moonlight

Ambrosia, Journal of Fine Haiku Issue 4 Summer 2009.

(2)
crescent moon
trembled and shuddered in bed
:breeze over the pond

Note:
Haiku no. 1 was revised after a brief discussion with Alan Summers and Vic Gendrano. The original version as follows:

deserted park--
old wooden bench succumbs
to the moonlight


Banda Aceh, June 17, 2009